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Re: Distance
I really luved this. I just got the most awesome feeling from it, I can't even describe it...but it was wonderful. The language was excellent as well. It was, like...jumbled, ...
Sep 30, 2005 -
Re: Leisure to Dream
My first poetry post on this site...let me know what you think. These minutes that amble by slowly Give me leisure to do the same As I daydream of your ...
Sep 25, 2005 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment?
I'm Sorry-Flyleaf Amazing band...debut album out October 4th!!!
Sep 23, 2005 -
Re: Inspiration!
I liked this, the feel of it...I could relate, that's one of my favorite feelings ever, when you're really inspired.
Sep 21, 2005 -
Re: Killer Albums
My personal faves are (in no particular order): Evanescence-Fallen My Chemical Romance-Three Cheers for Sweet Revenge The Nightmare Before Christmas soundtrack Maroon 5-Songs About Jane Nirvana-Nirvan
Sep 21, 2005 -
Re: Chapter names?
I think it's all a matter of preference. When I write, I don't use them that much, although I'm working on a story right now where I am naming the ...
Sep 20, 2005 -
Re: I need help!!! Writer's block...I want to die...
I have this cycle (which me and my friend call the writer's menstrual cycle) where for one period of time (I'd average it at about a week or so, maybe ...
Sep 20, 2005 -
Re: The Mirror
I like the ideas and imagery in this poem...mirrors are one of my favorite subjects to wrote about, I think they're very inspirational. But one thing, I think you use ...
Sep 19, 2005 -
Re: Boys in Eyeliner
Some guys can get away with it. Others...can't. And shouldn't try.
Sep 19, 2005 -
Re: you know, you could have said something
I'm going to be brutally honest about this...pointlessly obscene.
Sep 19, 2005 -
Re: "Love can lead the way" Please read and rate if po
This is nice, with good, honest emotion. But please go through and edit your grammar. There's a bunch of mistakes that take away from the overall impact of the piece. ...
Sep 19, 2005 -
Re: Dying is Beautiful
I liked the langauge and emotions and imagery here...but to me it read more like prose than a poem. The line lengths are so uneven, some are really really long, ...
Sep 19, 2005 -
Re: What do you use when writing?
I said pen in the poll, cause usually my first drafts of poems and stories alike are all written in notebooks. I have special notebooks for everything. But then I ...
Sep 19, 2005 -
Re: What's Up
Thanks for the welcome, everyone...and areida, to answer your question, I have a second degree black belt in TKD and I've been doing it for six and a half years. ...
Sep 19, 2005 -
Re: Strawberry Hearts
I agree with Firestarter. But I did really like the line "Love shall be suicide without you there to protect me."
Sep 18, 2005
